A quick note...

To inform my readers that I've finished the revisions on my very first screenplay "CARNIVAL". Written in 1999 (I was a teenager at this time) and never promoted before! The story of a serial killer terrifying Venice during the Carnival. It is 87 pages long...I've cut out several scenes, since we all know that all first time screenwriters tend to write unnecessary scenes, but the story was good...Now improved, it became a very good thriller in the vein of "the phantom of the opera" (for the masked killer)  and "don't look now" (for the sets)
Have a good week-end. 
Jordan.